Are we there yet?
“Why do we have to go? My friends are having a slumber party,” I said in an unhappy voice.
“Well we are going cause we haven't gone to see grandma in a long time, all of your cousins are gonna be there it will be so fun you even get to see your aunts and uncles you can have a slumber party with and with your little sister” mum said
“ That's different from my friends who are cooler,” I said.
“ Don't be like that to your sister” mum said.
“ How many more hours are left?” I said dramatically.
“ Why are you so dramatic?” my little sister said.
“Oh shush you are always dramatic when you don't have food” I said to my evil little sister, she always gets on my nerves “ you 2 stop fighting and there is 4 more hours left” mum said.It was so quiet no one was talking I was just looking at the trees minding my own business then my little sister screams “THERE'S A SPIDER!!!!!!”
“Calm down I will take it out” Mum said as she grabs the spider and throws it outside.
“Who’s the dramatic one now?” I said.
“Shush you are just angry cause you couldn’t go to the slumber party with all your friends” my little sister said.
“Yeah whatever go on to your side i don't want to sit next to you cause you always cry” i said.
“Stop fighting you know what once we get there you are gonna have no devices” mum said angrily.
“Man I wished we came with dad” my little sister said annoyed.
“Well your father is coming tomorrow and i want silence”.
“ Fine!” My little sister said.
“Can you turn music on please” I said
“ yeah ok” mum said. The music wasn't that bad
3 hours later
“Okay we are almost there I want you to behave just one hour left” mum said
“ yeah I will if Jane stays away from me” I said quietly to my sister so mum doesn't hear me
“I will only stay away from you if you give me 10 dollars” my little sister whispered.
“Ughhh fine” I whispered.
“ Please you 2 don't fight at grandmas’’ mum said
“Yeah ok” I said, giving my little sister 10 dollars.
1 hour later
“We are here” mum said
“Ok I will get the door” I said as I got out of the car.
{knock knock}.“ Hi What are yous doing” grandma said
“We came for the family get together” I said
“ it is postponed until christmas and where's your mother” grandma said
“Coming hi i'm here” mum said
“ it got postponed I sent you a message” grandma said
“Oh let me check {mum looked at her phone} oh sorry” mum said
“I couldn't have gone to the slumber party” I said
“Sorry” mum said
The end
Oh, no. Fancy not checking your phone. I like the way you have written the dialogue. It is clearly written and easy to read. Well done.
ReplyDeleteNicole some times I fight my brother yup I can relate to a pretty crazy road trip.One time I really wanted to go to my friends house and have a sleepover but we had a road trip.
ReplyDeleteI like your work because if I was 15 or 16 I woud not wanna go because I woud wanna go to a slumber party
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