My Mum is my superhero because she is the best cook,
Helpful and Caring.
My mum is the best cook. She makes the yummiest
fettuccine in the world; it's the best fettuccine
I've ever had. She also makes the best pasta, pad thai
noodles , and Sandwiches.
My Mum is a helpful person. She always takes
me and my brother to our training and she buys
and makes our food. She buys clothes for my family and I to wear and she pays the bills so my family and
I can have a roof over our heads.
My mum is a hard-working person she does night
shift so at day time she can take me and
my brother training. She works for Fisher Paykel
appliances and she does calls for people in America.
My mum is a caring person because every time
I finish my food and she starts to eat her food she
will offer me her food. She will also let me wear her
clothes when it is very cold even though it’s big on
me but at least it keeps me warm.
I learnt a lot about your wonderful mother. You used the 4 E's to help you add detail about each new idea you shared. You are beginning to write in paragraphs. You need to do this to show you arew orking at Level 3 and beyond.
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